This was great :DXD I love the whole "Bob" and "Mr. Prostate" thing, it made it all a little less serious and that's a good thing in "first time they're having sex" PWPs :) You also made the whole situation seem really real, with Seth being afraid, Ryan being comforting and so on.
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Date: 2006-07-21 07:06 am (UTC)I love the whole "Bob" and "Mr. Prostate" thing, it made it all a little less serious and that's a good thing in "first time they're having sex" PWPs :)
You also made the whole situation seem really real, with Seth being afraid, Ryan being comforting and so on.
Great :)