I spent one night reading this and loved it. Have you written anything else yet?
I have to agree with the person above who stated that Stan and Wendy's break up was brief. I think relationship that lasted so long shouldn't of ended so briefly like that. There didn't seem to be a lot of.. 'care' present in the two as if they didn't love each other.
Also, I don't usually read stories where the characters are in love with more than 1 person. I didn't know that was going to happen with this story but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
Still it bothers me that Stan was in love with Wendy as a gf AND Kyle >_
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Date: 2009-05-07 08:02 am (UTC)I have to agree with the person above who stated that Stan and Wendy's break up was brief. I think relationship that lasted so long shouldn't of ended so briefly like that. There didn't seem to be a lot of.. 'care' present in the two as if they didn't love each other.
Also, I don't usually read stories where the characters are in love with more than 1 person. I didn't know that was going to happen with this story but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
Still it bothers me that Stan was in love with Wendy as a gf AND Kyle >_