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Title: Right [Part Ten of the "Trials" series, a sequel to "Heal"]
Paring: Seth/Ryan
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,105 (this chapter)
Summary: Ryan and Seth are finally together, but now Ryan's got one very big problem. Something's stopping him from really being with Seth.
Disclaimer: Me = Poor. Josh Schwartz = Both very ballsy and extremely rich. Note the difference.
Spoilers: For everything. Literally.
Notes: This is a sequel to "Heal", which you'll want to read before you read this. All 12 chapters of "Heal" can be found here.
Part One can be found HERE
Part Two can be found HERE
Part Three can be found HERE
Part Four can be found HERE
Part Five can be found HERE
Part Six can be found HERE
Part Seven can be found HERE
Part Eight can be found HERE
Part Nine can be found HERE



Ryan growls angrily, attempting to untie the knot he’s managed to put in his tie.

“Ryan, calm down,” Seth says, coming up behind him and fixing the tie for him.

“I still don’t see why we have to go to this thing,” Ryan says. “After all that stuff she said about us…besides, it’s Christmas.”

“Mom is her maid of honor, we have to go. And…well, I guess we can take a few hours off of our Chrismukkah celebration for this.” Seth grins broadly before continuing. “We’ll just have to stay up extra late tonight celebrating to make up for it.”

“Well, when you put it that way,” Ryan says, turning around and wrapping his arms around Seth, kissing him softly.

“Hey, are you two ready—“ Taylor’s voice rings out from the doorway. “You know…seeing that never gets old. Still hot.”

Ryan disentangles himself from Seth and says, “Yeah, we’re ready.”

“Sandy’s waiting for us in the car.”

They head outside and climb in the car and Sandy drives them to the wedding.

After her wedding to Caleb, Julie insisted that this one be inside, so she chose a ritzy hotel with a ball room bigger than any room Ryan had ever been inside.

An usher shows them where to sit, and the four of them take a seat. Most people are still just milling about, since it’s still early yet, and Ryan spots Summer, in her bridesmaid gown, talking to Luke in a corner.

“Hey,” Seth says, shaking Ryan out of his trance.

“Hmm?” Ryan says distractedly.

“Taylor said that she thought Catwoman was a good movie. Help, Ryan, I think I’m going to cry.”

“It was good!” Taylor insists.

“See? There’s no reasoning with her, Ryan! Help!”

Ryan laughs and puts his arm around Seth as everyone starts moving into position for the ceremony.

*


The wedding ceremony is boring, Kaitlin thinks, so she tries to remember her favorite quotes from The Valley to distract herself. Charlie keeps waving to her from his seat, and it’s really starting to get annoying. Summer pokes her once, when she lets out a loud yawn just as her mom and Neil are proclaimed husband and wife.

Then there’s a lot of clapping, which Kaitlin doesn’t participate in, and they’re finally allowed to get the hell out of there.

“Hey,” Charlie says, sitting down next to her at the reception.

“Hey,” Kaitlin sighs.

She watches as her mom and Neil start their first dance, then other couples beginning to trickle onto the dance floor.

“Want to dance?” Charlie asks.

“No.”

“Come on, what kind of date would I be if I didn’t take you for a spin?”

“You’re not my date. You’re my—“

“Food stealer, right. But I’m pretty sure that if you look up the job description for ‘food stealer,’ you will find that I’m legally obligated to dance with you. I don’t want to get arrested for breaking the law.”

Kaitlin lets out a noise, part sigh and part growl, but allows him to lead her onto the dance floor.

“See? Not so bad.”

“Yeah, for you. I’m hot.”

“I am too. You told me so, remember?”

“That was before I found out about your loserness.”

“Hate to tell ya, Kay, but you’re a loser, too.”

Kaitlin leans away and glares at him, but before she can say anything, he presses his lips to hers.

“Bastard,” she says.

“Loser.”

“Okay,” she says, then kisses him again.

*


“Anybody want to go dance?” Summer asks.

“Sure,” Luke says, getting up and taking her hand.

Seth and Ryan stand up, too.

Summer catches Taylor’s eye. “Um…never mind. Let’s just sit here and make fun of everyone.”

“No, no, it’s okay,” Taylor says. “Go on, go dance.”

“We could do the Chrismukkah Barmitzvakkah thing,” Seth says.

“Really not necessary,” Taylor says. “Besides, Julie is already shooting daggers at you two, best not to ruin her wedding. Go on, you guys. Dance.”

“Are you sure?” Summer asks.

“Yeah, go on.”

Summer nods and takes Luke’s hand, following him out onto the dance floor. A little ways away, Seth is leaning onto Ryan and swaying slowly, caught up in a rhythm that no one else can hear.

“Summer, about Rhode Island.”

“Yeah?”

“Do you like Brown?”

“I love it,” she tells him.

“Okay,” he says, sounding like he just made a decision.

“What?”

“Like you said. I can wait tables anywhere. I’ll…I’ll come to Rhode Island next semester. Get an apartment near Brown. You can move in if you want or stay in your dorm. But I can’t take another semester like this.”

“I’m not asking you to move,” she tells him.

“I know you’re not. I’m offering. I just want to be with you, Summer. And if that means living in the fucking snow, then I want to do it.”

Summer feels tears spring to her eyes. Luke hates the snow. And the fact that he would do that for her? It’s almost heart-breaking in an absolutely beautiful way.

Instead of answering, she just pulls him closer and holds onto him for dear life.

*


“Ryan?” Seth says, watching Julie Cooper glare at the two of them dancing in the middle of her wedding reception.

“Yeah?”

“Maybe we should go. I think Julie is going to have a fit.”

“I don’t care,” Ryan says.

“But, Ryan—“

“No. I don’t care. I only get you for a few more weeks and then you’ve got to go to the other side of the country, Seth. I’m not letting her keep us apart now, okay? I just…I just want to dance with you, okay?”

Seth nods and lays his head back on Ryan’s shoulder.

He doesn’t want to think about the future. He doesn’t want to think about the fact that Ryan is absolutely right, even if he doesn’t want to admit it.

It’s fucked up, they have to be separated just when they’re finally getting together, when they’re finally in the swing of things as a couple. They’re finally getting to the point where they can just relax with each other and enjoy that. They’ve finally got themselves synched up, and now the world says, “Neener neener neener,” and pulls them apart again.

It’s not right, and it’s not fair.

But when Ryan rests his hands in the small of Seth’s back and exhales a soft sigh that tickles against his ear, it feels like the world is standing still, even though it isn’t.

And right then, everything feels all right.

It feels like maybe this story, Seth’s story—no, Seth and Ryan’s story—might get a happy ending.









END



As I promised, I think I'm done with this universe. If I ever write in it again, it's liable to be something that could be in this universe but doesn't have to be, because I really think I'm done with this whole thing (hence my intentionally leaving it OPEN for a sequel, but also closing it enough for this to be "the end"). That being said, I hope you enjoyed it anyway. I had a blast writing it for you guys, and your endless support and encouragement helped me keep going even when I wanted to give up. You even helped me accomplish one of my goals! I wanted to write a novel-length (50,000 words) story this summer, and I did! So thank you so much for all you've done for me. MWAH!

Date: 2006-07-25 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lizhowhp.livejournal.com
This universe has been my favorite in all of The OC fics that I've read, and I doubt any other story will knock it down from that position. Thank you for writing it, especially for the wonderful mix of drama, angst, and fluffiness.

Date: 2006-07-25 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you! I'm so flattered you like it so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2006-07-25 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 60schic.livejournal.com
I'm happy that you have achieved your goal but sad for me that this is over. Thanks for the ride.

Date: 2006-07-25 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Aw, don't worry. Eventually, after I write tons of fluff pieces (because I need to write some silly, useless smuttiness after all of this), I will probably come back and write that next sequel. I mean, come on, Seth & Taylor sharing an apartment in Rhode Island? Ryan all alone and missing his Seth in California? That's a story right there. Probably an even better one than these first two have been, because it could be more evenly matched in humor and angst. And also Taylor could finally get her due and have a decent storyline for a change. Heh.

Annnnnnnyway (cuz I'm rambling now), I'm glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2006-07-25 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 60schic.livejournal.com
Fluffy smuttiness to come? WooHoo, beam me up Scotty!

Date: 2006-07-31 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Hahahaha, "beam me up" *giggle* I am sooooooooo tempted to steal that line for Seth to say during sex. *snort*

Date: 2006-07-31 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 60schic.livejournal.com
Oh, please do! I can't wait to hear what Ryan's response to that is!!!

Date: 2006-07-31 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
*giggle* I can't either. I need to make one up. LoL.

Date: 2006-07-31 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 60schic.livejournal.com
Or even Taylor---if tha's who you had in mind.

Date: 2006-07-31 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Oh, no, definately Ryan. I like Sailor, but it works so much better as an amusing crush than an actual pairing, lol.

Date: 2006-08-01 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 60schic.livejournal.com
Yes---Seth all babbaly and flubbity....and TT blissfully ignoring what she wants not to hear.

Date: 2006-08-01 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Mhm. Her silly little Brad & Jen metaphor was just...priceless. God, I love Taylor. *pets*

Date: 2006-07-25 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katwoman76.livejournal.com
I really liked this universe.
Couldn't make myself care about Kaitlyn but I can live with that.

I still get the big *sigh* thinking about them being on different coasts soon, but that I knew from the beginning.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Date: 2006-07-25 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2006-07-25 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] potterndresden.livejournal.com
Okay, I've got to tell you...I never really read these when you started, because I only get 3 channels (no cable here) and I have never seen an episode of this show...but reading your story, because I finally gave in, has made me want to watch every show made yet, write the producers so that the way you have written it actually happens, and become an obsessed fan. You have such a way with words and I really wish that I could right something as well as you can. Needless to say that even though I've never seen the show...I love this story. :D

Date: 2006-07-25 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Awww. Thank you! The sad thing is, the show is...well, season 1 is great, season 2 is...okay, and season 3 is...horrid. It's like the show works better in fanfiction than it does as an actual show, which amuses me to no end. Ah well.

I'm glad you liked it. :-D

Date: 2006-07-25 11:02 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Hi! This is your Italian Fan ^__^! This fiction is so lovley, in particular this last chapter! It's so perfect that it can be a season of OC. I know it's your objective, and I think you have done a great work... Ah! I've started the traslation in Italian of "Heal" ;)!

Date: 2006-07-25 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. :-D

Date: 2006-07-25 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-lady32.livejournal.com
I just love Kaitlin and Charlie. Seriously, that is one awesome couple.

Date: 2006-07-25 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Awww! Thank you!!!! I'm so glad you like them, no one else seems to, but they were just as much fun to write as Ryan and Seth were, lol. I'm soooo glad you liked them. :)

Date: 2006-07-26 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigbrodom.livejournal.com
Wow, I can't believe this amazing ride has come to an end. Or at least until you write the next sequel ;)

Even with the threat of impending college, this story ended happily, and Seth/Ryan surely deserve that. I also love Kaitlyn and Charlie, he won't put up with any of her crap.

Thanks for proving there is hope for The OC after Season 3!

Date: 2006-07-31 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Aw, I'm glad you liked it! At this rate, I'll be writing The O.C. season 10 and they'll still be on season 4, lol. I need to quit jumping ahead, lol. :)

Date: 2006-08-19 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cutiecay22.livejournal.com
I never commented on this chapter, I read it like three times after you finished it and just relized. Of course it was great but now I really need you to continue with a new story. Your stories are the best and I love how you write all the characters so please for me post a new one. Pretty PLease! Ill be your best friend!!!!

Date: 2006-08-19 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'm taking a little break from writing at the moment, so I don't know when I'll start writing on this universe again.

Maybe I'll get to it eventually though. :)

Date: 2010-10-11 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] skatergurljubulee
Just wanted to say, thanks for writing this! I had it bookmarked on your lj account, and I have to say, I was really scared you took it down! D: But thankfully, I found it.

I read this series years ago, and it's still one of my favorite OC fics, handsdown.

Kudos!

skater

Date: 2010-10-11 09:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kaci
Thanks! It's actually still up on LJ; I changed my journal name. The place in the link that used to say kaci-jabeth should just be changed to denofiniquity now. Like this:

http://kaci-jabeth.livejournal.com/LINK.html

becomes

http://denofiniquity.livejournal.com/LINK.html

Date: 2010-10-11 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] skatergurljubulee
Oh, sweer! THanks! XD

Also, I was wondering if it was okay to add the series to my ereader? It would only be for me, and I wouldn't share it, but I don't like adding fic to my ereader if the author doesn't want me to. Any answer is fine!:)

Date: 2010-10-11 10:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kaci
I don't know what an e-reader is (so behind on technology...) but as long as my name's on it (either kaci_jabeth, denofiniquity, or my main LJ name guest_age is fine, I'm not picky), and a link if that's applicable (like I said, I don't know what an e-reader is, so it might not be applicable at all), then I'm fine with it. :)

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